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AEIS作文训练写好句子的五大方法!

作者: 湖南教育在线 发布时间: 2021年04月09日 15:47:36

  AEIS写作中想要取得高分,建议考生把简单句、并列句和复合句混合在一起使用。如果句子清一色是简单句,文章必定很单调乏味。那么接下来我们就来说说作文训练的五个句子写作手法!

  分享的一段例文:Ihave often wondered whether some people,whohad no intention of making a purchase,would takeadvantage of this privilege. One day I asked thisquestion to the shop girl, and I learned it was indeed the case。

  总之,作者可根据情况,使句子多样化,使文章灵活多姿。例如下列五个句子的基本概念一样,但是句式不同,内容重点也有些差别:

  (1) The goats grazed peacefully in the farm and were unaware of the approaching hunter. (并列分句)

  (2) Grazing peacefully, the goats in the farm were unaware of the approaching hunter. (现在分语短语+简单句)

  (3) In the farm, the goats grazed peacefully and were unaware of the approaching hunter. (副词短语+并列分句)

  (4) There were goats grazing peacefully in the farm, unaware of the approaching hunter. (简单句+形容语短语)

  (5) As the goats grazed peacefully in the farm, they were unaware of the approaching hunter. (原因副词从句+主句)

  (1)和(5)的句式最常见;如果加上其他三种互相交替,句子不是更多样化吗?我们再来看看下面两个句子要如何多样化?

  (1) The young pilot was on his first overseas training.

  (2) He felt very uneasy.

  (a) The young pilot on his first overseas training felt very uneasy.

  (b) The young pilot felt very uneasy during his first overseas training.

  (c) The young pilot's first overseas training made him feel very uneasy.

  (d) Extreme uneasiness seized the young pilot on his first overseas training.

  (e) The young pilot was on his first overseas training, feeling very uneasy.

  (f) It being his first overseas training, the young pilot felt very uneasy.

  (g) Being on his first overseas training, the young pilot felt very uneasy.

  (h) The young pilot was on his first overseas training and felt very uneasy.

  (i) The young pilot, who was on his first overseas training, felt very uneasy.

  (j) When the young pilot was on his/first overseas training, he felt very uneasy.

  (k) As the young pilot was on his first overseas training, he felt very uneasy.

  (l) The young pilot was on his first overseas training, so that he felt very uneasy.

  在上述12个句子中,(a)-(g)是简单句;(h)是并列句;(i)-(l)是复杂句。简单句除(b)和(g)之外,其他五样,用的人并不多。人们最喜欢采用复杂句,尤其是(j)和(k)这两款;接着便是并列句(h)。如果大多数人的句子只限于(b),(g), (h), (j)和(k)这五种,而其他的则弃如敝屣,不是很可惜吗?

  以上就是AEIS作文训练的句子写作手法,希望大家根据自身情况制定合理的复习计划,同时小编提醒大家,在备考中千万不能忽略语法和词汇的重要性!如果想要了解更多关于AEIS考试报名、AEIS教育网的信息,可以在线咨询我们或添加客服微信kewo11!